On 20th February, I departured for Australia.
Because I wanted to study abroad.
First, I made friends with my classmates. They were international,
so I felt cultural and language differences between Japan and many countries.
I excited!!!
And I went to Nightclub with my friend and my friend's host mother.
We danced and talked with many people, so I made friends then.
I stayed only 5weeks, It's really short for me!!!!!!
So I'm going to go to Australia again and I'll meet my host family again.
Never forget my life in Australia.
xoxo Eri
Hi Eri,
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On 20th February, I departed for Australia,
because I wanted to study abroad. First,I made friends with my classmates. They were international,so I felt cultural and language differences between Japan and many countries.
I was excited! Then I went to a nightclub with my friend and my friend's host mother. We danced and talked with many people, so I made friends there. I stayed only 5 weeks. It was really short for me, so I'm going to go to Australia again and I'll meet my host family again. I'll never forget my life in Australia
Hi, Eri.
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